Expository: Using PEEL
Writing Practice
An expository essay paragraph generally follows this structure: point, elaboration, example, link. To conclude the argument well, ensure the link reiterates the main point.
Structure your paragraphs with the PEEL format
Without PEEL
Missing point
Your reader will be lost as to what your point is and how it answers the question.Missing example
You do not show how your point is evidenced in the world.Missing link
Your reader might have forgotten what your point was, or how the example given supports the point.With PEEL
Point
Tells your reader immediately what your paragraph will be about and how it directly answers the question.Elaboration
Further explains your point, giving any additional details needed.Example
Supports your point by giving evidence of how it can be seen in the world.Link
Reiterates your point and transitions to the next paragraph.
Example:
Without PEEL Underdeveloped
We may not have previously baked because we were busy with other obligations. Being stuck at home means we get the chance to pursue these hobbies. We also get to garden.
With PEEL Well-developed
Holidays give us a time to pursue enjoyable home projects. These may be projects we always wanted to pursue but never had the time for. During the pandemic, the sale of baking goods and gardening tools skyrocketed as people took to these projects for respite. Hence, while we may not enjoy holidays the same way we used to, they still give us time to pursue fun projects.
