Descriptive: Irony and Contrast

Writing Practice

Complete your revision by reading this together with our 2022 Issue 4/5 print issue or as a standalone guide.

One way to make your writing more compelling to readers is to include some elements of irony and contrast.

Without irony and contrast
The narrative seems uneventful and bland as nothing quite stands out.
With irony and contrast
Contrasting descriptions help to highlight the differences in some elements of your experience. Situational irony occurs when you expect one thing to happen, but something else happens instead. These can be used to create more drama and comedy.

Describe your favourite room in the house.

Without irony and contrast
My study area in the balcony is a quiet spot for me in the house. I can be alone with my thoughts. “Ah, bliss,” I think to myself, as I settle on my desk and take out my notes.

Except for the occasional squeak from my grandmother’s rocking chair and the low hum of the fan, it is all quiet in here.
With irony and contrast
With two energetic younger brothers in the house, our home can feel like a jungle.

The balcony is the only peaceful spot in my house. Except for the occasional squeak from my grandmother’s rocking chair and the low hum of the fan, it is all quiet in here. After a long day of school, it is exactly what I need. “Ah, bliss,” I think to myself, as I settle on my desk and take out my homework.

When I finally step out of my cave for a study break, I am quickly greeted by a shrill call, “Ate, quick, come play!” I am assaulted by a small monkey of a brother who jumps on my back and another who tugs impatiently at my shirt.

Bonus: can you spot one more writing skill in the passage that helps to make the narrative more interesting?