Argumentative: Writing a Convincing Example
Writing Practice
Last week, you learnt how to plan out your essay points using the expectations versus reality framework. In further developing your essays, it is important to use examples that will convince your reader of your stand. This is especially crucial for argumentative writing.
Unconvincing
Your examples are
Subjective: from a partial, non-credible opinion
Personal: based on individual experiences that may not be indicative of broader realities
Convincing
Your examples are
Factual: based on verifiable evidence
Objective: from a balanced, reliable source that surveys a wider range of experiences
EXAMPLE QUESTION
Point: Fashion companies have started pivoting towards sustainable fashion.
Unconvincing
I have been seeing more second-hand stores around as compared to five years ago.
Convincing
Patagonia’s Worn Wear initiative repairs customers’ apparel to help them buy less. Other brands such as H&M and Uniqlo have followed suit with similar schemes.
